Change: “You should focus on helping others,” the hermit suggested.
درویش کا مشورہ، تم دوسروں کی مدد پر توجہ دو، بالواسطہ لکھیں۔
The hermit suggested that the king should focus on helping others. Suggested takes a that-clause here; do not write “suggested the king to.” Alternatively: The hermit advised the king to focus on helping others.
Textbook: pp. 111–112. Independently prepared study answer; not an official marking key.